I
decided to analyze biological research papers.
Though
academic biological research papers share features in common with other hard
sciences, the subject pertains specifically to some aspect of biology: it can
range from a physiological perspective such as the effects of multiple
sclerosis on the central nervous system to an evolutionary look at the
phylogenic relationship between the genomes of two organisms. The general organization
of every paper, however, is the same. The language is scientific and may be
difficult for the general public to comprehend, but that is because these works
are written to provide research for other researchers. The paper serves to
reveal findings from a study or experiment and provide evidence to support or
reject a hypothesis. The title is very specific and indicates these findings.
The title of the example I found was “Sex Differences in the Cerebellum and Frontal
Cortex: Roles of Estrogen Receptor Alpha and Sex Chromosome Genes”, which
discusses the association between chromosomal sex differences and neurobehavioral
diseases. It informs the reader of what the paper will be focusing on. It is to
the point and does not contain any unnecessary information. Unlike titles in
academic writing, empirical research papers do not emphasize creativity. After
the title comes the abstract. An abstract is a short paragraph that briefly
summarized the key points of the study: why the researchers conducted the
experiment, their hypothesis, what they found, and what that means for science.
Not every biological research paper has an abstract, but it lets a person know
if the paper will be of good use to him/her. The introduction comes next. It usually
poses some kind of problem that needs to be addressed; it provides general
information about a subject and then introduces an area of that topic that
should be further explored. It also explains how this scientific exploration
could lead to valuable knowledge or offer solutions to a current biological issue..
The introduction also states the main hypothesis at the end.
The
next main segment of the paper contains the methodology and results sections.
These sections could be combined, but they are usually separated if there is a
large amount of information. The methods section describes the equipment and
approaches used to perform the experiment; it explains the procedure, what was
used to do it, for how long, at what temperatures, and why. The purpose of the methods
section is to provide the reader with the information needed to be able to repeat
the experiment exactly. It is essential to conduct a repeatable, reliable experiment
so people can make more evidence to support or refute a scientific claim. The
results section states quantitative and qualitative findings. It does not
analyze the results. It simply states facts of what happened and includes
visual evidence, including graphs and tables, to get the information across.
The
discussion section is where the researcher implements statistical analysis to interpret
his results. He explains why or why not he expected these results, what they
mean, and whether he must reject or can accept the null hypothesis. This
section again ties the experiment to the “big picture”, how it is provides a
new finding and contributes to valuable biological knowledge. The researcher
also includes potential experimental errors, how his experiment could be
improved, and what other areas of the topic could be explored. The conclusion is
somewhat like the abstract in that it briefly explains the results and the
significance behind them. Acknowledgements compose a small but important section
of the paper that gives credit and thanks to those that helped the research
with the experiment in some way, whether via funding, providing resources, or
assisting with the project. The references section comes last and provides
citations of all the online or textual resources the researcher used to find
outside information on the topic, including other scholarly articles.
The
specific article I chose aimed to answer the question of whether the Calb
calcium-binding protein is dimorphic outside the hypothalamus, meaning it is expressed
at different concentrations in men and women. They also conducted a study to
see if deletion of a specific estrogen receptor would reduce the functionality
of the Calb gene in females. The broader purpose of the study was to develop a
deeper understanding of the links between physiological sex differences and the
different prevalence of neurobehavioral diseases among each sex. For me
personally, I believe the abstract and introduction are the most important
components of the piece as well as for all other biological research essays. It
allows someone who is not necessarily an expert in the field to understand the
key points and findings of the study. This way, scientific knowledge can be
spread across all audiences and not just people in the field.
Hey Jordan! I appreciated you defining some of the words that aren't common to everyone, and I'm sure your other readers will too. You did a good job identifying, defining, and explaining the purpose of the conventions of a biology research essay. You did a good job at explaining so what and who cares, especially with the part about needing to be able to recreate experiments so that they can support or refute the claim. You seem to really understand what you're talking about here and it definitely shows in your writing! I think your PB was very clear, informative, and well written, good job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how organized your paper, making it flow and easy to read. I appreciated this because I didn't have to stop and think about what is trying to be said. One thing I think you could have done differently is separate the first paragraph into an introduction and then a paragraph about the title and abstract. The first paragraph had an introduction feel, but all of the sudden I was reading about abstracts. Besides that I think you nailed the analysis of the "imrad" sections.
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